LI: create a plan to organise ideas and generate language
LI: to write a paragraph about a main idea
LI : to use a range of words make it more enjo for reader.
Mountain biking
2 weeks ago me and Room 6,7 and 15 went to camp.When we went there I was so nervous then we were preparing for the Wednesday Tuesday activities
We got the bigfoot people.My favourite activity was mountain biking,But it was the first time that I have gone on a bike.
In the first time we were just practicing ,
The funniest thing is that the teacher in mountain bike , has the same name as mine.
The other people know how to ride a bike ,So they go first.
And I Stay and practice, on the sea sor I went back and zoomed on to the sea sor.
But at last I did a very good job .
So yeah!
But when we are going to leave I was so sad.
I wish that we can go to camp again.